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The moonbreath exhales,
Skypaint blurs the horizon,
Stars go out. You're gone.

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^NicSwaner challenged me to write a haiku with the prompt "Use these modified words in your haiku: "skypaint" "moonbreath"". This was the result.

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:iconnoorelven:
beautiful! and sad!
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`KathrynODriscoll Feb 1, 2013  Student Writer
Nods, thanks!
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~Zevais Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist
The Starscream intakes
Darkswipe clears the dark sky
Brilliant Decepticons
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not my usual twist, but I couldn't help but put this one here
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`KathrynODriscoll Jan 16, 2013  Student Writer
This is lovely and sad
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Mood: Love ~WinterLeave Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
beautiful!
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`KathrynODriscoll Jan 16, 2013  Student Writer
yay! Thank you. :]
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~WinterLeave Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome:)
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:iconkuraitenshiv:
the result is good i likes
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`KathrynODriscoll Jan 16, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you!
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