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My vile heart beats on,
Unaware that you are dead.
How can it not know?

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*intricately-ordinary challenged me to write a haiku with the prompt "vile". This was the result.

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:iconkyndsie:
~Kyndsie Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Ooooh! Excellent use of such an undervalued adjective: Vile.
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:iconkathrynodriscoll:
`KathrynODriscoll Jan 16, 2013  Student Writer
Nods, was an excellent prompt!
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:iconzevais:
~Zevais Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist
My good soul fades now,
I am aware you're alive.
But my knows not.
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:iconkathrynodriscoll:
`KathrynODriscoll Jan 16, 2013  Student Writer
Hmmm
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:iconzevais:
~Zevais Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist
disreguard last comment... stupid typo...

My good soul fades now,
I am aware you're alive.
But my soul knows not.
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:iconkathrynodriscoll:
`KathrynODriscoll Jan 16, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you Monsieur Box!
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:iconkuraitenshiv:
yeah i get that...
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`KathrynODriscoll Jan 16, 2013  Student Writer
:nod:
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