Hear me read it!Leaves clutch their ropy fingers around the tree's limbs. The zesty leeches bloom, crack open overnight and slip silently up the nearest oak or maple. They pierce the crunch of bark and penetrate deep into the rubbery veins.
They feed. They pauperize plum and peach until they are heavy and brown; heavy laden with the stolen sap.
When at last they reach their fill the tree can finally shake them off emphatically, desperately, until at last it is clean again. The tree reaches its black bones to the sky in praise and as a new year begins vows never again to be the victim of leaves.
there are so many things we vow never to be victim of again but will fall for again and again every year. But maybe we should take the tree as example still. Also he falls in the same trap every year, he never gives up, shakes them of anew again each year.
I'm not sure I buy the inversion; you suggest what if leaves are like this, my brain doesn't want to accept the possibility because leaves are the thing that feed the tree, and the fruit. Leaves are the tree's raison d'etre. They are a poet's words.
Linguistically, strong work once again.
Silly, thank YOU for listening :} Love you xox