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I speared you with a         black-ink pen.
I tried to balance           the weight
of our weare-worn         shoulders.
Tried to counter         it with beauty
and hopefulness        , with my hopes,
persistence &         with my dark love.
They came to        see it in hundreds,
Droves, of         similarly seeking
hope and         a reason to continue.
Reasons         to love, even when it
hurts.         Reasons to try when the
vast         weight of differences 'tween
us         can't be fixed by adding
a         single strike of strength
        through the middle. Our love
      wasn't strong enough for poetry
     to save. It crumbled to nothing
    but the paper beneath the pen, and
  my half broken voice whispering a
tale of our forgotten, broken, love.
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Despite hundreds of you falling in love with 'You will never die', the love died nonetheless.

New word time!

weare-worn: worn down and weary.
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~Athazagoraphobias Mar 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
The formatting is particularly stunning... in a 'the first cut is the deepest' kind of way.
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`KathrynODriscoll Mar 22, 2013  Student Writer
blushes, thank you so much. I did think of that song when it was done too. How odd.
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:iconkuraitenshiv:
It's great, and sad. It makes me miss people
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`KathrynODriscoll Mar 5, 2013  Student Writer
:tighthug: me too
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:iconkuraitenshiv:
yay hugs =D
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Mood: Love ~WinterLeave Feb 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
very interesting and pretty, but don't regret love, dear <3 it's not the love that hurts or dies, it are the other things!
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`KathrynODriscoll Feb 28, 2013  Student Writer
I dont :] :tighthug: I am very very lucky, having lost my sister so young, in that no matter how much a break up, or a loss, hurts I don't regret love in any form.
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~WinterLeave Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm so happy to hear that! You're a very kind and strong person :) <3
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`KathrynODriscoll Mar 5, 2013  Student Writer
Aw! :glomp:! Thank you Winter :>
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Mood: Love ~WinterLeave Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
you're welcome!
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