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Crumpled in her palms
it became nothing more than a ball of tinfoil.
With blunted corners
    protesting /*¬\`| their way from the curl.

I watched her bite her nails
                  until the fingers swelled with blood
                  around the edges,
I did not stop her. I did not want to stop her.

Dissatisfied with the destruction
She put the packet on the table,
   rubbed it out smooth
   until it was flat and dull once more.

She tugged at the perforated veins
Until they dis
              inter
                   grated.

She ripped and dug the blunted corners of her hands
Until the seeds popped out.
    Pale faced imitations of her own blank face.
I did not stop her. I did not want to stop her.

She ordered them into a firing line
and carefully, consideredly,
                          she ground her fist into them.
           She made them into dust.

Finally, generations too late, the tears came
     and then I went to her.
     To pick up the pieces, to sew up the holes.
     To my Stitches..

The next day we went together. I held that same palm
as a fresh packet of Lithium was ordered.
                                         She cried.
                          Apologised for the waste.


Then I noticed that now she was, at last, outside,
                                   in the sun, where she belonged
The tears, the unblistered pack and her engagement ring
      All shone with the same timid glow of silver.
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Well if you have know me a long time you will be familiar with Stitches. If not check out the first three poems before you read this!

Stitches | Again, | Stitches, To Be

The Stitches series is about me, but not exclusively. Stitches (the original poem) is my most popular poem, because so many people relate to it. They want to find hope that they can be loved despite all their flaws and pain. Just like I do. Once the original poem was written "Stitches" became a noun. A name for people with 'frankensteined hearts'. A name for survivors, and those struggling to be survivors. It was a name for everyone... but at the end of the day, Stitches will always be, mostly, me.

Today I decided to attempt to enter the Colours Contest being held by =DailyLitDeviations. Firstly because I love the group and they do good things and have been for a long time and I wanted to help spread the word about their competition, and secondly because I love a challenge.

I chose to write about the colour silver (obviously). It is my favourite colour, but thats not why I chose it. When I started this poem I didn't know that it would be Stitches Part Four. It just happened. The Stitches series has been a journey of hope and sadness. Sometimes, when my life moves forward a little, her journey gets added to in literary form. When I wrote "Stitches, To Be" it was to celebrate the fact that I had hope, because before then I always thought I would be "Not to be" (Shakespeare references. I love 'em).


Today I wrote about the original Stitches girl. Broken, lost, emotional, afraid, but loved. The ring part of this story isn't a reflection of my real life situation, its a symbol of love that allows for all of my neurosis.

Which I hope for, with every thing that I am.


So now this poem is finished I see in it exactly what I saw in November 2008. Stitches. Me. Maybe you as well. The people who hope to be loved, despite everything.
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~valkvick Feb 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Love this...the story of a broken girl who, at the end, still has some hope. I think a lot of people can see themselves in this (including myself). :+fav: I enjoyed reading the Stitches series (which I just did), but this is definitely my favorite.
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`KathrynODriscoll Feb 21, 2013  Student Writer
Nods, that's exactly what the series is about for me... and for all the Stitches who reply to it.. which is why I'm so proud of it. but at the end of the day its just an idealistic poem about my hopes for the world and myself
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~valkvick Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It's important to have ideals, though. I think it gives us all something to strive for. Once you stop hoping and striving, that's when things actually fall apart and are lost. :heart:
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`KathrynODriscoll Feb 23, 2013  Student Writer
Nods true. When did becoming an adult become synonymous with becoming cynical.
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~valkvick Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I know right?
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~FailedStar Feb 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
being a long time fan of yours, even before the name changes (of both of us, I suppose), I have to say I like the series of stitches. It's nice to see you continue the story with this piece, even if it's for a contest, I think it wraps nicely into the series like a spin-off lol. As usually, you have a unique way to draw your story out with vivid wording, and this piece is no exception. My only "problem" with it is the fact that I'm competiting against you in this contest lol. :) good luck and good writing.

-Caith
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`KathrynODriscoll Feb 16, 2013  Student Writer
Gosh well thank you! I wonder what your username was before? :] Hello again anyway :> Good luck in the competition!
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~FailedStar Feb 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Nitsaj (I believe was my oldest), Liebe-für-dich, and MrPhy are a few of the more popular usernames I had. I think Stitches was the first deviation I read on this site too or darn close to it.
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`KathrynODriscoll Feb 16, 2013  Student Writer
I remember MrPhy <3 so hello! :>
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~FailedStar Feb 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:) glad you remember for what ever reasons they may be lol.
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