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Hear me read it

I splashed black ink onto your spine;
unintentional as I frenzied and fawned
to try and catch the elusive thought.

You patiently waited for me to return
out of breath and triumphant with my trophy.
We hung it on wood next to the elk.

In my haste to write of the love of you,
I'd written in you. I'd marked you as mine,
as my words intoxicated your weak heart.

The ink had permeated your flesh, your blood,
until it silted, deep inside you,
a permanent, unedited, tattoo of our love.
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*lombregrise Jan 28, 2013  Professional Writer
very nice - and good reading // thx for the share :rose:
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`KathrynODriscoll Feb 1, 2013  Student Writer
:tighthug: Thanks for reading and listening ! hehe :D
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*lombregrise Feb 1, 2013  Professional Writer
:rose:
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!PyrianAssassin Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my god I've never read something so eloquent since third grade!
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`KathrynODriscoll Dec 30, 2012  Student Writer
Laughs, not sure if thats a compliment or not, but either way, hi! :D
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!PyrianAssassin Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It is a compliment.
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`KathrynODriscoll Jan 1, 2013  Student Writer
:D Thanks then! Haha. Sorry, in England we don't have third grade so it could have meant anything!
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!PyrianAssassin Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh sorry for confusing you!
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`KathrynODriscoll Jan 3, 2013  Student Writer
No worries!
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~Ashes-and-Snowflakes Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Very inspiring. I haven't read something this good in a long time.
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